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โ˜พ๐”พ๐•’๐•”๐•™๐•’ ๐•‚๐•š๐•• ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐•ก๐•ฃ๐• ๐•ฆ๐••โ˜ฝ โค๏ธŽ๐”น๐•ƒ๐•„โค๏ธŽ ๐“‚€๐•–๐•’๐•ฅ ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•– ๐•ฃ๐•š๐•”๐•™๐“‚€ โ™Š๏ธŽ๐•š๐•ž ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•– ๐•“๐•–๐•ค๐•ฅ ๐•ซ๐• ๐••๐•š๐•’๐•”โ™Š๏ธŽ โ™ซI ฯาฝส…ส… ฯฯƒษพ ฦˆฮนษพฦˆฯ…ฮนฦš แ‚ฆฯƒฮฑษพิƒส‚, ษพฯƒฦˆฦ™าฝฦš ส‚ิ‹ฮนฯส‚, ฯฮนฦˆฦšฯ…ษพาฝส‚ ฯƒฯ ฦšิ‹าฝ ส‚ฦšฮฑษพส‚ Iฯ แƒงฯƒฯ… ฦˆฯƒฯ…ส…ิƒ ฯƒษณส…แƒง แ‚ฆาฝ ษฏิ‹ฮฑฦš แƒงฯƒฯ… ฯษพาฝฦšาฝษณิƒ แƒงฯƒฯ… ฮฑษพาฝโ™ซ

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Mary sue, Basic backstory, and vulgar.

Aceโ€™s backstory is about the same as all of tumblrโ€™s backstory for their OCโ€™s. please be original.

Not only was this unoriginal but you marked this as a category for 13+ yet it mentions rape and abuse. You should put a TW on chapter 1 because sensitive topics like this because survivors of domestic abuse wonโ€™t find this โ€œbackstoryโ€ entertaining

To be honest, I would give this 0 stars if I could ใ‹›

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I cried

Love the work! You can really feel the sadness (and joy in the little happy parts) that you put into this! It feels like im right there in the story, the way you described things was ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ!!!

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โœจ๐Ÿ’•

AAAAAAA I love the concept so much, and I think the idea is really cute! might do one myself ^^

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Intresting Narrative and perspective, Looking forward to more work of yours.

Iโ€™m too tired to write a decent review right now, but the plot and writing style you chose was interesting. I didnt even fall asleep once reading this, even though I havent slept in days.

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