Leia_Dominique

Hello everyone and welcome to my profile. I changed my mind about His Temptation & His Decision, they are back on. https://www.wattpad.com/user/YoLatinaBitch101

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Amazing

I loved the book. Great work 👍

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It was okay.

I was confused on what was going on in some parts of the story that I had to go and reread a lot. Try using bold or italics to emphasize flashbacks and things that happened in a different time. I love the storyline and how you decided to go with the story, but I do agree it’s a bit too messy with how you wrote it and the grammar needs a bit of work. But otherwise, great story, I truly enjoyed it 👍

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