Leigh Crowe

San Francisco

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Amazing!

I was completely enthralled in this story, I can’t wait until the next update. I love your writing style, it’s easy to understand what Angel is feeling, and to feel it with her. There were some grammar mistakes but nothing too major. I’m excited to see where the rest of the story goes. Good job and keep writing!

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Great start

It's a great start! You can feel Venus's internal sadness about not being good enough. I'm excited to see. how it plays out from here. There are definitely some grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's all. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Keep it up Shezz!

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Super cool start!

Wow! That was a really nice start, it hooked me. I love the characters’ personalities and their friendship is believable and not-forced. I’m very intrigued at what could be the meaning of this magic symbols and voice, I would read it if you kept writing. I love your writing style, it’s easy to follow and you have good vocab in there. It is only the beginning, but I can tell you have a quality material novel on your hands. One thing I might say is that the character’s are a bit hard to keep track of, mostly since they are all introduced really close together, and there isn’t much physical description of the characters. So far, I really love it. Definitely something I would read and recommend. Very nice job

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