Good, Can use some work
I read the novel, I enjoyed the part of the plot where they kidnap a princess from a foreign country only to learn she is a prisoner of her home and the alpha grown detached to her.
Read the story now
However, I noticed a wall of paragraphs throughout the chapters. You should reduce it to 2-3 sentences, reader can follow on it better than a 5-sentences paragraph believe me, I know. I had that experience once, they can feel it is a essay, not a story.
While I am attrached to the characters in the story especially with Cora and Steven's pack. While I am okay with the occassional OOC moments. You will need to describe the characters, the actions and if not the plot and if not make the character development not too quick but not make it slow. It can get take them out of the story and make them feel discombobulated.
Other than that, I would continue to read the story.