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Don't throw rocks at me

Ok, I'm biased, BUT, hear me out, ok? I had to do a review. That uneven number was winking at me, daring me to round it up. So here I am rambling about my own story.
If you like quirky characters, wholesome and cute romance with a fantasy twist and a mystery sprinkled in then this is a book for you, I highly recomend.Hop on this hot mess express and lets jiggy. 😅🤣 Wow, no wonder I suck at promoting😅🤣🤣

Interesting so far!

Okay, so the story so far has 7 chapters. I enjoyed it, and am interested to know where it goes from here and how will the relationship develop 😊 There are a few tweaks that could be made here and there but overall interesting. I'll keep an eye out fir more chapters 😊 Good wirk author, keep at it 😊

Binge worthy.

I was turning pages like a loon. I enjoyed the book. The plot is great, very immersive and keeps you on your toes. Though to be honest I didn't like that the heroine did what she did before settling things in her relationship. But the suspense....It's great. Now if you excuse me I'll be over reading Book 2.
Great job!!!!😁😁😁😁💙💙💙💙💙

Amazing!

I read the current chapters and well, I got hooked from the first few paragraphs. I loved

Ariana and Erik both, though maybe there were a few too many mentions on him thinking how she is meek and docile, maybe a bit too naïve that seem a bit repetitive. The story has potential to truly be a great fantasy romance. The writing style is beautiful, There were just a few spelling mistakes here and there but the flow of the story is good, the pace on point. I couldn't find any major fault with it. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more chapters, so keep them coming author you got yourself a fan! XD

Intriguing!

I loved the story! Third person is rare on this app and I really enjoyed it. The plot is interesting, the characters fun and the descriptions transport you into the scene. I could actually imagine this being a good TV show. I would definitely watch! Many questions to answer, as to who our protagonist is and what's her full story? Who is Clyde? What's the whole deal with Destiny and Valerie and her posse? I'm eager to learn!
There are very few spelling mistakes, nothing that takes away from the story. Great Job author!

Ooh very fun!

I love the plot! Though I think we would need more of an introduction before the black box, seems a bit fast but I love the idea. It's always fun to explore the new world even if it's the one you just left, to see all that has changed and how it could change. It gives a lot of room for imagination of the writer to turn it into a magnificent and fantastic story. This one has amazing potential and I enjoyed it immensely. I love Joao the giant and Sam is a strong lead. I can't wait to read more of the story! Good work author!

Loved it XD

I read two stories from this collection. Isn't a childhood friend the furthest place from love? which attracted me first because I like the trope and By my side. I loved them both. The characters were fun and adorable. The thing that we see characters from the other stories reminded me in a way to ones-hots of shojo manga, where you have a group of friends or just people that interconnect and get their own stories. A bit like Sugars. There were a few mistakes, missing a word here and there but nothing that deters from the stories. Anyway, the writing style is clear, simple and beautiful, and I truly enjoyed these two heartwarming stories. Great job author XD

Love it

I enjoyed the story. The worldbuilding and the descriptions are well done, and the plot is quite engaging.
I liked Luna's character, a sort of quiet strength that she has, plus her intellect. Though hers and Soren's relationship develops fast, and it's something I usually don't really like, (a personal preference)
I loved their connection. I loved them together, they were diabetes inducing. XD Anyway, I found the story to be really interesting and engaging. The only minor thing is that the dialogue didn't start with the capital letter when it should have. Other than that I have no complaints. Quite an enjoyable read. So, great job author!!!🧡🧡🧡

Very interesting

The plot is very intriguing. This story is vastly different from the usual werewolf ones I read, so I really enjoyed it. Osei as a character fairly well developed and his bond with the wolves is endearing especially the two who seemed imprinted on him since childhood.
The story will need editing for grammar and punctuation , but it's not major that you can't follow along.
Anyway, keep up the good work author 😊

Love the story!

I got hooked from the first chapter! The story is engaging, and very well written. El, our main MC is a wonderful, strong female character, who went through so much, and her chemistry with Dillan a privileged, rich neighbor is palpable. I love the way The Shadowman were incorporated and their representation in the story. It gave a deeper meaning to the connection of our main characters. I really enjoyed the story. Binged it in one sitting XD So great job author :)

Oh, fun!!!

I enjoyed this story a lot!!! Can't wait to see what's in store next at part two!!!! XD One horror survived only to start the next! Can't wait! XD😊🧡🧡🧡

Enjoyable read!

SO, I had fun reading the story. For now it has 15 chapters, but so far it's interesting. I liked Liam for some reason more than our man Callum, since I found his character for some reason more appealing to me and better developed, though I'm not nixing our boy Cal just yet, we'll see how the story develops further. In the first chapters there are scenes that seem to flow a bit faster but in later chapters the pace is pretty consistent. A few things need to be tweaked that I mentioned in the comments but overall it is an interesting story. Good job author! 😊🧡

Promising!

Okay, the story is in it's infancy but...I like the premisse of it! With a bit of polishing in a sense that some scenes need work pacing wise, and well I can't say much about character deapth from five chapters but I think the story has great potential!!! It's fairly entertaining and I would love to know where it will go from here, so on that note keep at it author!!!! Keep up the good work 😁👍

LOVE IT!

This is a beautuful story!!! It's simple and is beautifully depicted and done, but the theme that the story explores is far from simple. Bravo author! Like the other story I've read from this author the story explores character growth and the female MC dealing with a certain issue, which I bet a lot of people could have come in contact with. I loved our man Jax and the way he cared for Adeline, I loved the boys too. I really enjoyed reading this story!! Now on a more pressing note....I need more of your stories!!!! 😁🧡

MORE!!!

OOOH, I love it so far!!! The tension and suspense is high from the start, and the action is well done and described so it immerses you fully into the scene and transports you onto the page. I can't wait to see how things unfold from here on out!!! How will they deal with the devastation of their pack and how will she deal with everything that will hapen in the next pack! GOOD JOB AUTHOR! Keep those chapters coming 😁🧡

Oh, goodie!!! 😁

Okay, I love the story so far! The characters are interesting, both leads have huge egos, and their banter is fun. Our fae us a firecracker, who's git a mouth with a life of it's own, a bit impulsive, so I wonder how her growth as a character will go. Our man a proud dragon king has a temper to match. I'm interested to see how they burn together 😁As for the worldbuilding, from what I glimosed it's interesting, the plot is engaging and I can't wait to see what hapens next. Good job author!😊

Need more XD

I loved the story!!! It hooks you in from the start, Mira is hilarious to me, and Azar is interesting in his own way.. The world building is interesting, I like it that they don't know much of how humans work and it's interesting to find out how she'll navigate as the story proceeds. The only reason I gave writing style a four is that a chapter or two might need a bit more show don't tell, other than that I really really enjoyed your storytelling!!!! I love the plot and can't wait to find out what happens next! XD Great job author!!!

Really Enjoyed it!!!!

Okay I had a lot of fun reading this story. It's character centric and we follow a girl who loves history and views the world through a historic lens. as she navigates a change in her family dynamic that forces her to be around an old friend with whom she doesn't really jive.. I loved the references and it made me learn a few things.... I loved August for being a sweetheart who looked at her as her and liked all her quirkiness. Really enjoyed the character exploration and her relationships with others in her life and the way everything resolved in the end at the conclusion of the story. Great job author!!!! 😊🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

Blood Stained

Ok I enjoyed the story! The plot twists were fun, the action keeps you on your toes, the ending had me like WHAT?! It's interesting, though I have to admit Quinn in some instances acted like a real brat. But the story continues and there is a lot of room for her to grow as a character. There are some small things that might need fixing but overall an entertaining read! Good job author 😁🧡

Freaking interesting

Okay I greatly enjoyed the story.! The characters were fun, the plot twist's too. Daisy being a favorite, sorry Olive! It might need a bit of tweaking here and there but nothing major. I am very eager to find out how the story of the next gen will fare in this series!!!! Good Job!!!!🧡🧡🧡🧡😁😁😁

LA principessa

I enjoyed the story. The plot is intriguing, Their relationship moved a bit fast and I would loved to see a bit more depth in Santino's characters but I really enjoyed reading the story, and will keep an eye out for more chapters. Good job author, keep those babies coming! 😁🧡

A roller-coaster!

I enjoyed the story and the roller coaster of emotions it elicited. It's dark, brutal, fun and spicy....It delves in some heavy themes, and the author does a good job dealing with a number of different characters. The drama keeps you on your toes...a very interesting read. Great job author 🧡🧡🧡🧡😊🥰

Impressive and so so Good!!!!

I read the currently available chapters and to say I loved the book would be an understatement. The plot is amazing! I read a lot of werewolf novels but this one sticks out so much and in a very good way. The world building is superb, the descriptions, the style of writing completely immerses you in the world and it feels as if you are sitting on the main characters shoulder through the whole ride, experiencing everything yourself. And the plot twists...so many of them to keep you hungering for more. Weaving mystery and romance throughout...the author has done a magnificent job, a true chefs kiss. I loved Isla as a character and Kai is such a sweetheart. Them as a team will be a force to reckon with. Can't wait for more of their story and actually from more stories to come from the author!!!!! I would recommend this book to all werewolf romance lovers, there is just so much to love about this story 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Good Job!!!

When Moon and Sun fall in love

Well, this was so adorable and wholesome. Cute story and sweet enough to give you diabetes. Though the paragraphs need to be divided so it's easier to read and to space out the dialogue so the chapters are not just one big cluster. Overall good job 🧡😊

I love, love, love it!

I loved this book. It's about six chapters in but I was hooked from the first one. The plot is really interesting and it leaves you with a ton of questions and just grabs your attention. Keep up the good work, I'll stay tuned for more XDDD

Dark and intriguing

I enjoyed this piece. The prose is beautiful, rich and oh so colorful. The characters are captivating and so deliciously dark, i loved them. The twists and turns of this story just pushes you to read further. The author style of storytelling is really interesting....I loved this story.

Very interesting with great potential

I liked the story being told from the murderers perspective, though i would like it if it was a bit longer because you could really delve deeper into her psyche, for us to really immerse in a mind like that. It could use a bit of editing and maybe scratch the flashbacks in the middle of the chapters, just let it flow with her telling the story while she is in her cell. Overall with a bit of touch up it'll be a great psychological thriller, good job :)

Potential

Ok, I had fun reading the story, but it need a lot of editing. At times it was hard to follow, in later chapters it got better. The characters are fun but need a bit more developing, backstory vise. The plot is fun enough and makes you want to know more of what is to come. Keep up the good work :)❤😁

Very interesting read!!!!

I have read the 14 chapters so far and I got to say I'll need more. It's a interesting plot and I will continue to read to discover what happens next! There is a mistake in two chapters i think but it's really small, he already told her he has siblings, but she was surprised about the information again in next chapter.
Overall good job XD 😁❤

Fun spicy read.

Well, this book might be a bit too 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶 for me but I enjoyed it. The sex scenes weren't awkward, they flowed nicely and the underlying plot keeps you reading. So overall a very fun read, I'm off to the next installment. XD
Good job author and keep steaming up our reading glasses, thank you 😁👍

Great read!

If you like badass, straightforward, strong female protagonist this is a book for you! Our siren Aster is all that and then some. The plot has twists and turns, it's intriguing and thrilling. The worldbuilding and lore are interesting. Great job author I enjoyed the chapters so far and I'm on a lookout for more., keep them coming, you've got yourself a fan! XD👍😁❤

Fun read.

Though I'm not a fan of insta love (that's just my own preference) I had fun reading this book. I like the pairing of morally gray guys with an innocent, naïve, sheltered girl but the characters would need a bit more developing. There are some structural mistakes in sentences and somethings kept repeating that would have to be revised and edited, but anyhow I enjoyed reading the story.
Keep at it author and all the best luck 😁👍😊

Loved It!

I enjoyed the story so far so much! The plot is very interesting and so are the characters. Love the writing style. I'm waiting for more chapters. :)))
Keep up the great work! ❤❤❤❤😁👍

Rose

I enjoyed the story. It is quite engaging, it keeps your interest. I liked Rose, though Damien's character confused me a bit,, But overall i really enjoyed the plot. There are some grammar issues but those can be easily fixed and didn't deter me from continuing to read.
Anyway I liked it! Good work author! ❤😁👍💕

Good work :)

I like the plot and the characters, though I was a bit confused at who is who at the beginning. The story has a lot of potential, but will need editing. Keep up the good work author 😊❤👍😁