LenaP91

Hello and welcome to my writing nook. // Future Doctor of Medicine//Fantasy/Romance are my favorite genres. All in all an introverted NERDY bookworm burrito. D&D player XD

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Binge worthy.

I was turning pages like a loon. I enjoyed the book. The plot is great, very immersive and keeps you on your toes. Though to be honest I didn't like that the heroine did what she did before settling things in her relationship. But the suspense....It's great. Now if you excuse me I'll be over reading Book 2.
Great job!!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Potential!

The story needs a lot of editing. The plot is interesting, but no spacing makes it confusing a bit. With good editing I think this story would shine brilliantly. It's an interesting premise.
Good luck author :)))

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Great work!

The book is really impressive. Though it starts of a bit crammed with a lot of info dumping (though it was kind of necessary considering) the story develops beautifully from there on. The mix of history and myth is blended wonderfully, and the historical characters and legendary ones are brought to life splendidly. I loved princess Sbara . The amount of work and research that went into developing such an amazing story is really commendable. I truly enjoyed reading the book, great job author :)

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Amazing!

I read the current chapters and well, I got hooked from the first few paragraphs. I loved

Ariana and Erik both, though maybe there were a few too many mentions on him thinking how she is meek and docile, maybe a bit too naΓ―ve that seem a bit repetitive. The story has potential to truly be a great fantasy romance. The writing style is beautiful, There were just a few spelling mistakes here and there but the flow of the story is good, the pace on point. I couldn't find any major fault with it. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more chapters, so keep them coming author you got yourself a fan! XD

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When Moon and Sun fall in love

Well, this was so adorable and wholesome. Cute story and sweet enough to give you diabetes. Though the paragraphs need to be divided so it's easier to read and to space out the dialogue so the chapters are not just one big cluster. Overall good job 🧑😊

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Intriguing.

There are just a few chapters now, but I'll wait patiently for more, because I need to know how everything will unfold!!! The story has potential and I liked Amelia as a character so I'll stay tuned as to see what happened that turned her life upside down. Keep at it author you are doing great!!!! XD

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Oh so so good!

To my anime and manga loving ass, this wonderful, intricate world hooked me in from the first page. The story is ongoing but the first five chapters are so good. I can't wait for more!!!! Keep them coming author you are indeed very talented XD Love it!!!

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I love, love, love it!

I loved this book. It's about six chapters in but I was hooked from the first one. The plot is really interesting and it leaves you with a ton of questions and just grabs your attention. Keep up the good work, I'll stay tuned for more XDDD

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A Royal mating

I had fun reading the story. It's engaging and with a lot of twists and turns. The pace at which their relationship develops is a bit too fast (but that is just my slow burn loving ass talking no offense). I think that the male lead is charming but maybe needs a bit more development, and the secondary characters too a bit more personality. The story has great potential and I'm awaiting new chapters so keep them coming XD

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Dark and intriguing

I enjoyed this piece. The prose is beautiful, rich and oh so colorful. The characters are captivating and so deliciously dark, i loved them. The twists and turns of this story just pushes you to read further. The author style of storytelling is really interesting....I loved this story.

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Very interesting with great potential

I liked the story being told from the murderers perspective, though i would like it if it was a bit longer because you could really delve deeper into her psyche, for us to really immerse in a mind like that. It could use a bit of editing and maybe scratch the flashbacks in the middle of the chapters, just let it flow with her telling the story while she is in her cell. Overall with a bit of touch up it'll be a great psychological thriller, good job :)

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Potential

Ok, I had fun reading the story, but it need a lot of editing. At times it was hard to follow, in later chapters it got better. The characters are fun but need a bit more developing, backstory vise. The plot is fun enough and makes you want to know more of what is to come. Keep up the good work :)❀😁

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Very interesting read!!!!

I have read the 14 chapters so far and I got to say I'll need more. It's a interesting plot and I will continue to read to discover what happens next! There is a mistake in two chapters i think but it's really small, he already told her he has siblings, but she was surprised about the information again in next chapter.
Overall good job XD 😁❀

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Fun spicy read.

Well, this book might be a bit too 🌢🌢🌢🌢🌢🌢 for me but I enjoyed it. The sex scenes weren't awkward, they flowed nicely and the underlying plot keeps you reading. So overall a very fun read, I'm off to the next installment. XD
Good job author and keep steaming up our reading glasses, thank you πŸ˜πŸ‘

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Great read!

If you like badass, straightforward, strong female protagonist this is a book for you! Our siren Aster is all that and then some. The plot has twists and turns, it's intriguing and thrilling. The worldbuilding and lore are interesting. Great job author I enjoyed the chapters so far and I'm on a lookout for more., keep them coming, you've got yourself a fan! XDπŸ‘πŸ˜β€

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Fun read.

Though I'm not a fan of insta love (that's just my own preference) I had fun reading this book. I like the pairing of morally gray guys with an innocent, naΓ―ve, sheltered girl but the characters would need a bit more developing. There are some structural mistakes in sentences and somethings kept repeating that would have to be revised and edited, but anyhow I enjoyed reading the story.
Keep at it author and all the best luck πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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Very interesting read!

I enjoyed reading this book and would recommend it to Sci-Fi lovers. The plot is intriguing, and gripping and I loved the alternation from WWII to present events, it didn't take away from the story it just added to it. The narrative is quite detailed which I enjoyed,
Good job author :)

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Loved It!

I enjoyed the story so far so much! The plot is very interesting and so are the characters. Love the writing style. I'm waiting for more chapters. :)))
Keep up the great work! β€β€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ‘

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I love the story

I like the premise of the story. The relationship between Soren and Luna is so sweet. The pacing of the story is good. I'm gonna need more chapters author! ❀❀❀❀❀

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Rose

I enjoyed the story. It is quite engaging, it keeps your interest. I liked Rose, though Damien's character confused me a bit,, But overall i really enjoyed the plot. There are some grammar issues but those can be easily fixed and didn't deter me from continuing to read.
Anyway I liked it! Good work author! β€πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ’•

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Good work :)

I like the plot and the characters, though I was a bit confused at who is who at the beginning. The story has a lot of potential, but will need editing. Keep up the good work author πŸ˜Šβ€πŸ‘πŸ˜

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Love it

I enjoyed the story so far. I read 21 chapters and i really like Archie. He is a strong character with a good head on his shoulders despite all the crap he went through.
Cant wait for the next update :)

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