Louise Hope

Fantastic and hilarious

It’s like a mixture between the bodyguard and pretty woman. I’m loving the comedy in this and it’s really well written. Keep it up xx

Running with wolves

I am loving this plot. The way you describe the characters and surroundings is so realistic I can imagine myself right there! I can’t wait to read more!!

Lotus

This book is such a great read. The storyline is extraordinary! I was not expecting the twists you put in. The story drew me in from the start and I’ve been hooked completely. I can’t wait to read more and find out how everything unfolds!

Desmond

I am loving this story so far! Completely different from the usual genre I read. You have really thought everything through right down to the small details like different fruit and drinks! I love the story and connection between Ayla and Desmond! I can’t wait to read more!

Epic Romance! Love love love!!

I have no words to express right now!
At first I was unsure how I felt after reading the first chapter. This is the first book I have balled my eyes out to! Your writing is so powerful, and the way to depict images and scenes is inspiring. I’m still wiping the tears away as I really thought Luna and Coop were lost but I am so happy they found eachother again!
I have no criticisms, just keep writing your wonderful pieces and I’ll sit back here as your biggest fan!! Xx

Broken Halos

I have to give this book the highest rating. Right from the start you had me hooked!
I love the gritty books, suffering hero’s in their own lives. So many times you had me tearing up!!
Your plot is amazing and so well written. I love the language you used and I have no criticisms!

One Letter, One number

I absolutely love reading and to come across this book for a review swap was a great idea.

This book has so much potential, and I really felt like the author cares about her characters. The plot line was a great idea, I love the idea of letting fate decide how the characters would meet. I hope I don't upset you with my review as I don't want it to come across negative it's just ways I think you could improve the book and really show your potential.

The reasons for my scoring are:

1. The descriptions: I wanted to know what the characters looked like, the places they visited and what things looked like. The readers senses are a magical thing and I really think you should expand on this. It draws the reader in even more and allows them use their imagination.
2. Storyline: I really enjoyed the storyline and how you pieced it together. I do believe you are treading close to other romance novel so just be careful with that.
3. Language and writing: I love the writing style, using POV's is a great way to convey a characters emotions and feelings. I feel like you should expand on this, allow the characters to display their emotions fully. Your language with the characters should portray them. I felt like the same person was talking all the way through instead of being able to differentiate between them.

Overall this is a really good story and I would encourage you to work on it further because you have a great imagination.
This review wasn't meant in a negative way, please continue writing your stories and I look forward to reading more :) xxx

Harmony

I came across your post in the Beta- Discussion group, I am a new writer and I love reading others stories.
What a great short story! The way you convey emotions is beautiful! I got a really good feel for the story and you set the scene really well. I could really feel the emotions especially the frustrations of the characters.
You are so talented.
I have seen you have some more books so I intend to give them a read too! I have just started writing so if you want to, I would love to have some feedback on what I have written so far.

Happy writing :) xxx

LOVE

This story is fantastic, such a great plot. I love the POVs and you've clearly thought about your writing. Keep up the fab work and pay close attention to some of your grammar, I got a little bit confused in some areas, but that might have been my computer jumbling paragraphs. :)

Gripping and shockingly wonderful

A few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but the story is put together so well! The writing style is perfect and I love the exchange of different perspectives. The characters are thought out in detail and every article is described right down to the finer details.