More Context PLZ
I really enjoyed reading this story. Not a huge fan of fantasy, but I loved the western feel to it. Kind of reminded me of the John Wayne movie UNDEFEATED with Rock Hudson.
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Anyway, the writing style is fantastic. It is written very professionally, albeit maybe a little too much dialogue.
My only problem with it is that there needed to be more story in the story. I like to fall in love with the characters I read, but it was hard to follow who's who and what's going on due to how the story starts. I'm used to reading stories that start in the middle of conflict. It can be very interesting when coming up from one side's perspective, especially if you find out later the other side was less controversial and it makes you think. The premise of the fantasy war going on between Wolfe and Elf was interesting, as I'm used to the elves being portrayed as the all-powerful good guys and from their perspectives they're everything innocent when from ancient tales I hear they were more a corrupt kind that died out due to their own arrogance.
Well, a theory, anyway. Keep writing, though! I would love to read more of this story