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Love love love

How the story build was perfect!
The way he reacted was the sweetest thing. You’re very talented!

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Loved it!

I loved this! Can’t wait for more! It got me waiting every night fir an update and after I would hope there’d be more.

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Beautiful

There is no other way to describe this story then beautiful.
Great concept, nice turns in the story, not to dramatic. Just real beautiful.

I've got to say there is one chapter where I believe a sentence has been cut short, the finishing line where they open the presents and they are waiting for Mason's reaction. But it isn't there.... But I could be wrong of course.

Loved the story!

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Beautiful

One word: beautiful

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Great!

I’ve been laughing my ass off! Great story!

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Loved it

Great story.
I thought I was dramatic but damn... these people know how to blow the hell up!

Great job writing it!

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Like it

I like the overall plot and the end is very sweet.
It’s definitely a story I would recommend but there are some grammatical errors that could be fixed with a quick re-read.
It’s the same two words, attatnion instead of attention and belive instead of believe. It’s just a small thingy.

I really do like it! Great job!

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Loved it!

Just loved it. Great details it really fills the mind...

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I like the story

I really like the plot and such but for me the story goes to fast within the chapters.

But other than that great work!

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Love it

It was perfect.

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Just wow

I saw this book when I was working on my own and it just spoke to me, I clicked on it and started reading. The plot is perfect and feels unreal, you can't describe the love you feel, by just reading the first chapter. That kind of love is not easy to find and I must say incredible job, convincing some of us and making a lot of people believe in that kind of love.

Once I started with the first chapter, I couldn't put it down. I had classes and I just kept on reading, I feel like I'm a horrible student. Three hours later and I'm about to start crying, God this book is so good.

I wonder about the next one but I'm a bit scared to start because of the secrecy. One day I'll try though.

You have a real gift, don't let anyone tell you differently.

This book should be published in all the worlds languages.

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Great story line

It was very complex and I didn’t understand some lines and chapters.

The writing wasn’t bad but it was confusing.

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Love it!

I just loved it.
Simply just loved it.

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Nice

Very nice storyline. The multiple POV are very interesting but I got a headache from it aswel. That’s probably just me since I’ve been studying all day.

There are very little grammar mistakes but I get the mistakes while writing. Sometimes it just flows out of you without thinking the grammer trough.

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Very nive

There were some small grammar mistakes. Sometimes you needed to think very hard what it meant but overall I read this book 1 one day so I’d say very good job!

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Love it!

The story got me laughing.
The story got me mad.
The story got me balling my eyes out.

You're a very good storyteller. I can't wait to read Wittney's story.

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