littlemiss67

Coffee, a good book, some silence, and my bed. All I currently need in life.

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Wow!

I love it! You've set the plot straight and clear, and it's definitely very enticing. I love how you're not using the typical fantasy creatures (werewolves, vampires and demons) and I can't wait to see where the story goes. You've introduced the characters and the story very well, so all I can say is, keep doing what you're doing!

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Brilliant

The progression of the story is great, not too quick or slow. Your writing really brings out the emotion intended and I love the conversations between Mason and Lauren. The only thing left tbh is to finish it. I love it.

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