L . Heart

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I'm a girl who lives in reality and fantasy...

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Love the story line but needs so spelling edit too

I love the story line and I'm excited to see how the two lover with make it out of live in this story!?! I really do enjoy the romantic and it's twist with the novel but there is some spelling edit that needs to be add your text, to understand the chapters better because sometimes I read a sentence and don't get what it means with the spelling mistake. That's my thoughts on the story but your the writer so I'll go with your thoughts on this also I do love the story and the contact with all of the charter I wish the best of luck with your writing spirit and life bye now...

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Love it

Hi, and I would like to say that I love it!!! All of it how you also focus oh the other characters then just Angel I find it wonderful because many other authors do give even tension to side characters to there own story or history and to see there point of view on the events going on around them. So I would love it you keep doing that , it makes the story even more enjoyable also to understand.

P.s. I want to be selfish for a sec and ask for a steamy, heated,lemony chapter of Angel and her Lover ZeZe being in each other's arm and becoming one (I'm having sex, sorry I just want you know what I meant) also being detailed about it . I hope that's too much to ask so...keep up the good work

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