I’m not sure what I was expecting before I began reading this, but I certainly didn’t expect to be unable to stop reading! I thought it was perfectly written; I couldn’t fault your style, nor your technical writing abilities - something I haven’t experienced with books other than those that have been edited and published.
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The character is exceptionally relatable - while I’m only 19, like him, it’s easy to see the world in a cynical light and he perfectly encompassed the flaws in the American system. I read the previous review before reading the four samples you have up so far and agree that it is long winded and somewhat overly detailed in terms of how his views have been shaped/his backstory - but I can’t say this deterred me or tainted my enjoyment of the book so far in anyway.
I will certainly continue to read as the book is updated and if it continues to be a brilliant as it is so far, I’m certain I’ll see it on shelves in the near future.