I like to write, and read, and draw. My favorite color is blue, and I don't like cooked carrots. I have a big family, and I've only ever finished a couple stories.

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It was pretty Great!

I think your story is incredibly cute, and your writing isn't hard to follow like many stories I've read. I love the characters, and I'd like to see how Freya develops into a stronger young woman. Her personality is cute, but I feel like she's too much of a baby, with not enough opinions of her own. Thank you so much for having the courage to post your own story for others to read, I'm thoroughly enjoying it! :)

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