Easy to get into
What I liked most about this story is that it is really easy to get into -- the author establishes the perfect balance between giving details that make the scenes and characters vivid, and still have the story move on at an enjoyable pace. The main character, Priya, feels very real and relatable because her thoughts, emotions and story are all there at the right time and in the right amount. The author's style flows well, and it's both an entertaining and intriguing read :)
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The one thing I'd recommend might be making the chapters a little bit shorter (not as in, take anything out, but consider splitting them up) because some readers might just want to read for a couple minutes at a time and then it's easier to find where you left off.