This story is amazing. It made me loose sleep. I was reading until 7 am or when my eyes gave out. I love Dramione fanfic.
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What I didn’t like is it’s written in past tense. It made some of the events a bit confusing to read.
So I mentally read everything in press tense.
In my personal opinion is to read in present tense so it feels like the events are happening as I read it. Because my English professor always says: when you write, you write in present tense. Because whoever is reading it, they’re reading it in real time right now.
Punctuation and grammar, spelling is all good. 👍
I’m glad it has a happy ending. I need a continuation with a James and aurore fanfic.
And a Draco POV or maybe the memoirs of Draco Malfoy about his side to the story.
Great story. Loved it!