Flaw

Malaysia

Just your normal, aspiring, 20-year-old girl trying to improve her writing with every small, pain-staking step....

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A Simple, Engaging Read

While some of the language can be tidied up here and there, overall, the work presented gives an insight into common occurrences of today's youth which resonated with me as someone who also had similar feelings when growing up and reflecting on the world. Clear thought, much effort, all the best for future chapters! Can't wait to read more!

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