LouisaDiamond

Interested in being an author and having fun with books. Crazy about music and art plus I love nature with all my heart. Hope to use inkitt to read other works as I try to perfect my writting.

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Interesting Plot

This story has an interesting plot. As a sucker for the broody, moody character finding a love interest they are softies for it's easy to get involved. However, the dialogue and descriptions could use some work because sometimes it takes out of the story or doesn't make the story easy to follow.

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Interesting

The plot twist, the flow of the chapters, the depth of the characters, the scenery. I could go on but the book is nothing if not interesting. Everyone is crazy in their own way in this story

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Blown Away

I give five stars for everything because I am not really a critique and I like everything but from where I seat, I love that the start was a Bible chapter, maybe it's just me but I love it. Adore angles as well and sorry for the late review but I am glad I got to read it. Just realized I can only write one review so I am going to pour it all out here. I am in love with this book, the plot and story is beautiful. I don't know how to explain how much I appreciate the angle of Faith the book carries, it touches me deeply. Keep going.

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Chapter 1-10 (An engaging plot)

I like the story's plot because it has serious potential. It's watching one of the seven deadly sins, Greed, get bored with greed, and is attracted to a simple girl in the world who becomes a source of interest for him. The writing style is great for world-building, understanding the character's thoughts and setting stakes. My only little issue is the little use of dialogue. I wish they spoke more, and interacted more with their words as they do with thoughts. I would also like to see them more in their own lives so I can appreciate their attraction to one another and why they find each other so enthralling. Outside of that, everything else has been good so far.

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First Five Review

First Five chapters were a great foundation for the book. Got to see Noah's life and Addison's as well in contrast to how they were in the past. I am not sure how we are meant to feel towards Declan but I personally like him. I like misunderstood characters whose hardness could be mistaken for cruelty, at least I am hopeful that is what his character is about. Maybe I'll find out more later.

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Five Chapter Review

First Five chapters. One thing I love about a book is if it has characters I can invest in or if not, a good plot I can follow. This has both, so that's great. I love Toby's struggle and would really like to see what happens with his story. Also like Jean's character and want to see where she plays in. This was a solid first five chapter read.

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Loving Felix

Read the first chapter and consider me hooked. As someone with ridiculous crushes through out my life I relate all to well to Cleo at this point. I love the fact that the book is so cultural, from the name to the way they speak. As Nigerian, Ghanaian languages have never sunk in even after living almost half my life here so I rarely understand but I always have fun hearing it. This is amazing. Aside from a few issues that editing that chapter can fix... I salute the author.

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Werewolf

Well... It's heated. Heated being my best word to out forward. I don't know the mate thing, has me getting real Siren vibes and I like it. I don't really read much of werewolf stories but I love the plot of this one.

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The story

So the book plot is amazing because personally I am up for all things nature and earth related. I like innovative books that come up with things like cures and technology the real world doesn't have yet and this books has that so... LOVE. There are a few grammatical errors but the author can fix that so overall the book is captivating. I am not finished but what I like the most is the names of the characters, very cultural.

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All Fives

I am not good at giving reviews but I hope this helps. Here we go.
The blurb/ summary of the story is so inviting. I rarely read fantasy but I think its a brave choice for the author. The names and titles you came up with are so fitting and easy to remember. The plot of the story also seems well laid, can't wait to see how the entire story plays out.

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First Chapter

Okay so I don't know anything like a bad book or at least not yet so the first chapter gets a solid all five. The horror didn't take forever to start so that was nice. I hope to cobtinue it with time.

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Chapter One

Really got me smiling, Sometimes writers forget to put a little informality in their books but the first chapter had it all down. Communication between the friends was really so sweet. Hope to read more and more.

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