lozjonson

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Great read, I especially enjoyed the progressive introductions of each new character through chapters 1-3. (I especially liked how this technique was adopted in chapter 3: Julos). This technique of writing has allowed me to relate better to each of the characters, I can imagine who they are, which is what a story needs. The only disappointment with the writers style is the sometimes over powering use of description.

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