LyricalMan65

Fort Worth

By trade I'm the Sr. Creative Designer for the largest manufacturer of helicopters in the world. But I'm also an illustrator, musician, poet and short story writer.

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Hot But Needs Editing

The plot was okay. I thought the passion was great. But there are several times where words were misspelled or it was the wrong word or tense and it took me out of the story. This is never a good thing, but especially in a steamy sex scene. Overall it was decent. But I can tell this was not thoroughly edited.

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