LyricCoffee

overall thoughts

You remind me a bit of myself when I started (i began writing on different platforms before I discovered Inkitt). The story has lots of growth potential. One key thing is consistency, having a set schedule to write and update your work will help you gain momentum on whatever platforms you have exposed your novel to.

Enchanted

The plot is very captivating, he did a good job keeping his readers engaged. The storyline is concise and easy to follow. His writing style is clean and fun which is entertaining for the viewer. Despite this being a fantasy novella, I see a lot I could correct in my writing. overall I am having a blast reading it!