M Cobbett

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Loved the story

I totally loved the story. The author made me care about the characters from the get go and that's crucial. I am not a Lycan reader at all so for me to get engaged it had to have a great story line and keep me asking "What happens next?"
I struggled with the story being in the first person.

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Thoroughly engaging

I concede I have been fooled. I thought that the book was by a modern author writing in an old style and yet I find this is a published works over 100 years old. I'm saddened that I have been cheated. Yet I am glad for it was such a good read.

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Need more

I could have done with more. What happened to the girl did she die? Totally engrossed in the story that I didn't want it to end.

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I loved it, a sweet love story

I'm a sucker for the HEA. I love Fairytales and this ticked every box.

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Love the story love the characters

Love the story love the characters. The author could do with paying attention to the spelling and grammar. The further along it gets it reads like it's rushed.

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Gangbang

This has the potential to have a good strong storyline but it reads like it's sex for sex's sake.
I was left thinking that Derek didn't get the revenge he deserved and Tommie was as bad as Harley.
I did appreciate the author's use of adjectives.

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A great imagination

First I LOVED THE STORY!
You made me care about your characters in the opening chapters and this made me carry on reading to see how things panned out for them.
Your descriptive text early on helped me visualise your characters clearly.
You were careful not to upset anyone and chose your subject matter wisely.
I saw your writing grow as I read along and you got to know your characters; and I loved your prose.
Only downside for me is that sometimes I wasn't 'with' the characters I was a third party reading about them (and this might just be me) but terms such as 'had been' and 'have been' somehow detached me from them but apart from that I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for such a lovely story and for sharing it with us.

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My Stepfather's Son

It's a kinky premise, one of the explosive erotica sub-plots, a forbidden fruit.
The storyline is good, and the author made the character's likeable even the bullying Lucas.

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