A lot of potential!
As this review is written, only 7 chapters have been published. I like the plot and am intrigued by your world-building. I noticed.a few grammar mistakes (unless they were intentional) that slightly bothered me, for example in chapter 2 when introducing the best friends, you put their whole names inside brackets instead of naturally introducing it through a conversation later on.
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The biggest problem I had with your writing is easily fixed. It is the varying point of views within chapters. I personally prefer to have only one point of view in each chapter. Chapter 1 especially felt chaotic and was a bit hard to follow but that was also influenced by the amount of information being given all at once.
Besides chapter 1, though, the writing was good and easy to follow, and you convey the feelings and inner battles of the characters superbly.
Overall, it is a good story which I enjoyed, and I can't wait for the upcoming chapters!