Mac Bizzo

Pacific Northwest

Discover the Lost Chronicles of Cleopatra

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The taxi...

I got an Aeon-Flux vibe that increased my interest from chapter one to move forward. A Good read and a good follow.

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Clean Read

Thank you. Well done. I'd love to see a different cover.

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If you love dialogue...

...which I do, you will love this author. There are several chapters of good fast paced dialogue segmented into "a day in the life of". I added this to my list and will not share any spoilers. Nice Work.

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Powerful Blurb

I felt a motivational voice in the prologue that kept me reading the first chapter.

I like that style, I don't see it so much from other writers. Good Work.

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Brave

Poetry is the least read type of writing in this era. It's brave for any person to put poetry out there to the world.

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Good Foundation.

The cover and title are compelling to me. The hook seemed to be the main character entering a classroom as a new student. That's something I can relate to.

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Nice cover and Tag line

I was interested and read chapter one, the last part in italic kinda lost me tho. The first paragraphs jump off well for good character development. Cheers and be blessed.

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Great Cover

I dont normally read these kind of stories, but the cover caught my attention. Good choice. Cheers and be Blessed.

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