Maddie E. McGuire

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Beautifully written

Very well written! Descriptive and grammatically correct. I can't wait to read more and see how this unfolds. Love it!

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Can't wait to read more!

Can't wait to see this story unravel. The length of the chapter works, punctuation and spelling is good. Looking forward to meeting Lars.

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Love it

The style, plot twists and title have me coming back for more. The grammar needs some work. Sometimes the wrong tense is used, or there's a missing comma. Otherwise, I like the story and
I look forward to reading more.

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