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Unchained Torture To Bliss

Amazing, absolutely amazing. Few things can get me excited. But this story does. 👏👏👏.
Update soon❣

Five x yn

The chapter is incredible. But there are a few grammatical errors.
Each time someone different is speaking, you should form a separate sentence.
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to your following chapters.

Love By Illusion

Love your characters and settings.

P.s:- instead of applying the astrix as a separator, use the lines icon. It looks like a dash.

Endless Seas

Oh my goodness Morrison. I'm loving this novel. I can't seem to put it down. You're definitely getting my vote.

Leah & Kitty The Saint & The Prostitute

In the very first few lines, this story drew me in. The main character has strengths that she hasn't discovered as yet. She's strong and has fortitude.

With minor grammatical errors which can be fixed, you'd be raking in many stars quickly. Remember, when you're putting in any punctuation marks in your stories, the comma always goes before the inverted commas, (","), etc. Also, shorten your words, eg. We're not:- weren't
She is:- she's

Chapter 3
"Extra White Gums?",
Eg. "Extra White Gums?"

"Where the hell is he?".
Eg. "Where the hell is he?"

Minor errors. Very good plot. Keep up the great writing Ja 💫💥

Chop,Sautee, Fricassee

The plot thickens... Seems like Cirsi is there to keep everyone on their toes... I don't trust Lewis BTW.. I'm in anticipation for more.. Can't wait...

Grammer

Remember to use Capital Letters and commas..Also,keep in mind that stories are told in past tense..Use "had" instead of have..."Was" in place of were...Try to avoid repeating the same word in close proximity...Incorporate a few similies as well...Otherwise great plot...
I'd definitely recommend your stories to my friends and colleagues...