Mahsa Nasimi

Tehran, Iran

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Astouning

I didn't see this coming to be honest. But the way the author finished her previous story with a jaw_ dropping style, I knew something would be coming, but not this. I mean it in a good way. Because the author has written a plot full of twists and surprises which makes you want to read the story in a break neck speed!
I also have to say that for those of you who enjoy being shocked time and again, this is the story and so is its previous story.
Totally recommended.

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A well thought story

First off, I was looking for a squeal for Tomb raider: angel of darkness since the developers themselves didn't bother with it.
In my opinion the story had so much potential if the developers hadn't hurried things. I wanted to know what other gamers thought of the continual of the story and by great luck, I found the golden seal written by Meldelen.
I believe she had been most loyal to the heart of the main story and the characters' biographies. The story she represented is very sound and intact, to a point that I wished this story would become a game.
As I have written in the title, this story is very well thought, you won't be able to put it down. It's a very good read.
All in all, I love this story and recommend it.

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