MomoYaorozu

Hi!! I'm 16, and your mother! I'll be writing stories that you'll hopefully enjoy. Also a vast reader, so don't be afraid to reach out and reccommend me any. Feed back will be appreciated!

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Nice!

This is really good! Maybe you could improve in areas such at setting of pace, but the pace is definitely better than the other bakudeku smut one. Much better

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It's alright, but could be improved.

I feel like it was a bit too fast paced, but I understand as you mentioned your don't really write that much. I would appreciate more detail on things such as character feelings, setting, and overall situation. Also I'm sorry, none of this applies to the one shot as I'm too scared to read it ;-; Other than that, dialogue and characters are pretty nice. Good job!

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