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Stellar

This author has really fine-tuned his skills as a writer. This story was a joy to read – the irony of our human nature at play, the added urgency and severity to the established scam we still fall prey under.

I also commend the author for touching on the idea of suicide from a controversial yet reasonable point of view. The over-all reasoning of the character is sober, cutting through sheep mentality with crisp clarity only to question the benefits of such a rebellion - a metaphor of life in general perhaps?

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Satisfactory rebellion despite looming doom

Yet another great story by this author. While original in details, visuals and configurations, the cynic in me sees the sad metaphor of the real life humans repeat over and over: the working ants supporting the uppers with hopes under delusions as their reward. It is also another sad reminder of how ignorance is often the happier trail. That being said, the story is yet very entertaining, and while you don’t anticipate a happy ever after, there is still a lot of satisfaction felt from the character's acts of rebellion and deviations from the norm - from the expected. Nicely done!

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Stellar

This author has really fine-tuned his skills as a writer. This story was a joy to read – the irony of our human nature at play, the added urgency and severity to the established scam we still fall prey under.

I also commend the author for touching on the idea of suicide from a controversial yet reasonable point of view. The over-all reasoning of the character is sober, cutting through sheep mentality with crisp clarity only to question the benefits of such a rebellion - a metaphor of life in general perhaps?

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Multidimensional and original.

This story is far the best I've read by this author. His stories are always very original and imaginative, along with depth, but his writing style has greatly improved in this story. It was well balanced - just the right amount of detail, description and explanation to support the story. I love how the author plays with contrasting ideas and mentalities. It questions how we view ourselves as evolved humans, and how we might hinder further evolution by branding ourselves as a finished product only seeking to perfect its current state. The story took off quickly, and kept my curiosity throughout. The pace was perfect. I highly recommend this story - it was joy to read!

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Very Clever

I wasn't expecting rhyming, or humor, but a dark story, so I was pleasantly surprised by the lighthearted cleverness of this tale. It was entertaining to read and left a grin on my face. The scene described could actually set the stage for many dark bedtime stories to come.

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