I am really, really sorry..
Okay, right off the bat, you said the onomatopoeia 'beep beep beep' and added "my phone beeped", all you needed to say was "my phone beeped" and leave it at that. Also, in a novel, you should NEVER write as if you are texting someone. And one more thing, you obviously didn't know how to write the details of the surroundings, and you tried WAY too hard to do so. You should have started with,
Read the story now
"I woke up in total darkness as I heard the ringing of my phone, I reached over and searched my night table with my hand until I found the pull-cord and switched on my lamp. I grabbed my phone and the light projected from it pierced my eyes, I blinked a few times and eventually got used to the brightness. I looked at my notifications and saw that I had a missed call from [Whomever called]" Then just take it from there. I hope this helps.
I'm really sorry if this was at all harsh, in any way.