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A review for Syraphia by EntityknownEvil
Got directed here by the author herself. Started reading it, schoolday turned into a day of reading. I really like the apocaliptic world she has created. There are some oddities in the writing tho, but I guess they are because she did have to do it for NaNo (which she wrecked, good job!). In the first half of the story she overuses the sentence "the other male" or "other male" for Reno and it just catched my eye a lot. But at some point she forgets that it exists, but then uses "runner" a lot for Reno aswell. :P
Will get a 5/5 after these are fixed I guess.
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Neither do I know what I wrote here.
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