MarlaynaJames

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

I let my characters tell their stories without criticizing their actions, working their stories or interference. Most importantly, without binding them to a specific genre.

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Sugar Daddies

I like the cute couple, the unexpected turns in events and the character building.

I would recommend this to any Janet Dailey or Dorothy Garlock fans. It’s a quick read. It’s a fluffy romance with a couple erotic scenes towards the end. There are some issues with punctuation and author seems to be having a love affair with commas. I’m the author so l may be biased.

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