Martha_M

Based in Austria / Studied Literature / Film enthusiast / "He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song (By W.H. Auden)

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The Chamber of Sins

'The Chamber of Sins' is an adventurous story about (half-)angels, a ghost, and demons invading the human world. The first sentence of the story is catchy and makes you want to read more - excellent job! The author created an exciting world with convincing characters and wonderfully described settings. The pace and flow of the story are just right and provide enough space to elaborate on themes and characters. The author is very good at handling plot structure, and action-driven scenes, which is, in my opinion, one of the most difficult tasks when writing a story. The dialogues have been well written and also the paragraphs are coherent and contribute to a good reading experience. In general, I enjoyed the writing style of the story and the author's diversity of expressions.
The only thing I noticed was a few typos and sometimes a switch from past to present tense, but this can be easily fixed.
You can see how much work the author has put into this story - keep up the good work and I'm curious how the story will evolve. :-)

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Gunslingers 🤠

I loved it! Clint Eastwood and Roland Deschain salute Zeke 😊 great story with a lot of action...and of course a love story. Pace of the book is also excellent as well as the vivid characters and the fabulous detailed descriptions of guns, horses and landscapes. I was also impressed how the author managed to give each character their very own dialect! Great job!

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Interesting 🌻

This is an interesting unique story, and if you like Lord of the Rings you will love this book. It is full with magical creatures who have to overcome their (political) differences in order to fight evil. Blair, the main characters has to fight her inner demons. The author's creative mind transforms into a vivid fantasy world. Sometimes it might seem a bit overloaded with themes and new narrative threads, so I am curious how the story will evolve. All in all, I enjoyed reading it and recommend it to readers who are into fantasy. 😊

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Fated Enemies

The authoress composed a clever story, including a complex political issue as starting point. Especially the character development is impressive and dialogues are well written and relatable. The plotoutline sounds very promising, and so far I have read an intriguing story about werewolves and vampire with a little touch of the Underworld-Universum. I also like the story's pace - well done! Considering that the authoress is not an English native speaker, I think we should give her credit for publishing in English - this is not an easy job to handle as I'm in the same situation 😉 Sometimes words do not exactly fit the context which is probably a translation issue, but could be easily changed, maybe with the help of a proofreader. Thanks for sharing your story! Best, M.

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Lycanthrophy

I just finished chapter 16 and I enjoyed the story so far.
The authoress has managed to compose a clever plot with a good and interesting underdog-theme. The story starts with three werewolves united by their fate and abandoned by society. This little pack of wolves introduces three important types of literary characters: a female protagonist, a confident in form of Terrence, and a foil in form of Amy. Excellent! For those who like romance, you will not be disappointed: there also seems to be a love interest, and I am curious how this relationship will develop in the upcoming chapters. The authoress surprises with her creative mind and vivid descriptions. In my opinion the pace of the story could sometimes slow down a bit, occasionally resulting in 'telling instead of showing'. But this can be easily fixed. All in all it is surely a book many readers will enjoy. Keep up the good work :-) Best, M.

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Go, read it!

Go and read it! Excellent writing style, good plot structure, perfect pace. Loved the characters and the twisted love story 😉

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What a surprise 🤯

I have to admit I wasn't expecting such a good story at the beginning. First I thought, some typical werewolf-book, but believe me folks, it's far from that! There are many twists, an excellent, vivid and hilarious writing style, steamy scenes for those who like the erotic genre, and relatable characters. I read the book in no-time due to it's thrilling plot. I'm really surprised there are not more reviews, and I hope this will change. Just saw that there is a second book - lucky me 🥳

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Creature Seers

I would like to congratulate the author on this wonderful and exciting story. In the beginning, it might have taken me a few paragraphs to really get into it, but then it was such a great reading experience. You will encounter vivid characters, great dialogue writing, and a fantastic job in terms of describing the scenery. You can see how much effort the author put into this story. I love her take on the mythical creatures and the many referrences to other great fantastic stories such as Harry Potter and Narnia. I was also impressed how excellent the author dealt with pace. I know many readers do not like long chapters, but I thought it was brilliant how the author established a scene, especially those packed with actions. I loved the description of this 'slenderwoman' - creepy and therefore, well written.
I'm curious how the story will evolve and if there is also a sort of coming-of-age theme to it (which would be great).
I hope to see more of it and can only recommend reading it.
Best, M.

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Oh wow

Ok, to be honest, I don't know where to start - I am fascinated and shocked at the same time 😂. Usually, I'm always a bit sceptical concering Erotic Novels as most of them are not well written; this one however, is indeed a completely new experience. The hot scenes are well conducted and the author made sure to show many different kinds of sexual fantasies - very interesting.
What else can I say:
- the book's organisation reminds me a bit of an anthology: each chapter is a new scene, a collection of the characters' experience and history...what a good and clever Idea
- the author takes a completely new turn on Vampires and their existence...it reminds me a little bit of Jim Jarmusch
-the author does not rely on stereotypes and the urge to develop top-model looking characters - how refreshing, thank you very much!
- Sex scenes are very explicit, and sometimes also rough, but cleverly put into context which is very important
- characters are vivid and the storytelling about their personal history is excellent
-sometimes I would have used different vocabs, especially in the hot scenes...but that's just a matter of personal taste
Otherwise, and if you are into Erotic Novels, go read this book - you will be 'satisfied' 😉

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Very engaging 🌻

I hope there is soon a new chapter!? 😱😉 Love the writing style and also the two main characters. I guess so many of us can relate to Kelly's school situation - all this pressure by successful parents and teachers. I bet Kelly has a creative mind and these just work in different but beautiful ways 😍 as for the relationship: from a plot-perspective, I am very curious how you going to solve this 😉 btw: I love the slow pace!

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