Marvy Virago

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You saved my life

I don't even have any words to say about this book, only that it was the most beautifulest book I have ever read this year. I fell in love with the characters, the writing style, and the overall plot. If your looking for a very good romance fantasy book, I one hundred percent recommend this. Love this so much. Keep doing your thing author.

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Good one

I loved the story!It was nice to read something fresh in a while!It was very well written and I couldnt stop reading<3 It was amazing! I especially loved the writing style and the plot grabs you - the suspense was just right! There were a few spelling mistakes but they were otherwise minor. Other than that, I'm so happy to have read this.

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Winds of change

It has clear storyline and and keeps you on the edge of your seat. The authors writing style was good but some parts felt rushed and even though I am no expert in writing its something minor that writing more books will fix.

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take me to church

I really enjoyed reading this book! I just couldn’t stop reading it! Good job! The plot was great. I finished it in under a day because I couldn't stop reading. I wish the story was longer and went into more detail towards the end. Overall it was really good!Best story I have ever read in a long time!!!

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Interlaced Fingers

The story is utterly remarkable. I was really beautiful. I dont have the words to say anything further.

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Bravo

Eloquence, that lies within the writer, its just so perfect. It is full of emotions. It is truly beautiful. The author has used less words and told us so much in them. It is utterly fantastic.

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Good try

The story was very nice. There are some certain surprises which makes the story more enjoyable.
I loved reading it. I hope the author keep writing such stories.

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Absolutely amazing

The story was very interesting. I enjoyed reading every line. The plot is very well constructed. The grammar and punctuation is perfect. The dialogues are written artistically. It was very suspenseful and full of curiosity. The writer knows well how to develop a scene. No changes are required, since it was utterly amazing.
I hope the writer, L. A. Weiss keep writing such beautiful written stories.

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Just another day

This is an absolutely fascinating book I have not been able to put it down rather I haven't wanted to put it down.

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My life story

I loved this book because its suspenseful. I definitely lost sleep. Lol I would recommend this book to any and everyone. Its definitely a 5 star book!

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Red venom

Very nice story...thumbs up😍😍...highly recommended

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Within glowing shadow

It's a very good story
Wowwww...I love this story

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The danger kids

Fun story to read. Good ideas for a plot and was really thought about. Needs some work as far as the execution but easily fixed.

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Belle unchained

I really liked the story but I wish it explained things more without drawing it out. Some things went too fast for my liking. Nonetheless, the book was captivating and since I've picked the book up this afternoon I had read it at any chance and stayed up till 11:30 to finish it,

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Good

It’s difficult for me to find a story that can enjoy but this book was amazing. The characters couldn’t be any more perfect.

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A blind mating

I loved reading this story❤❤Excellent work😊

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Elevator to hell

Nice write up. Very great plot too. I love the simplicity and intensity well described. I see the grammar to be ok and well coordinated. I must applaud the writer for using very simple words to describe and disentangle complex intimate emotions. Nice job.

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Unsuitable

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS BOOK!! Captivating storyline and a good flow.

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Color code green

I love this book you did a great job on it, can't wait to read your other books.

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Good

I really enjoyed reading this story. The writer creatively made me feel as if I was watching the story unfold right in front of my eyes. Loved how the writer described certain elements in the story – made it that much easier to really dive into the storyline and characters emotions. Here and there grammar, punctuation etc. mistakes but it didn’t really bother me that much while reading.

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Moonhaven

I lovedeverything about it. I began reading this in the morning and i finished it already!

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Ivy on the wall

One of few good stories I read.I love the characters and writing in this book. This story is so new and intriguing. I would definitely recommend it.

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Close

Loved it. Great work. The story is so intriguing and captivating
Had a hard time letting it go

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Good

Loved The plot alot it was refreshing and loved The way story proceeded .
Got me hooked from The get go !!!
10/10

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The S girl

I really don' t know what to say.. I am speechless and yet want to write everything.. I think I have never read a story/book that turned my feelings upside down.

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Sin for me

I love the story so far it is amazing the plot is good and the characters is inspiring looking forward to finish it

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Dark shadows

I loved the plot of this story so much! The characters are amazing and the story is even better! Few grammar mistakes as well and I love that. I love this story. I will definitely read other books by this author. I really recommend this story as it's not cliche at all.

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Electric riot

One of the most amazing stories that I've ever read. Amazing story I love it so much!

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Dream walker

Lovely concept.... Something fresh and interesting..... Looking forward to reading more of your works.....

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Good

One of the good story i have read.Honestly such a well written story. Was not expecting it to be so good!!!

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Enigma of skies

I really like the plot. It's quite interesting and different. You have a very high standard of writing but you still keep it simple and neat. Maybe you could make the chapter a bit longer though but other than that.

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Hollow's charge

I really like the plot. It's quite interesting and different. You have a very high standard of writing but you still keep it simple and neat. Maybe you could make the chapter a bit longer though but other than that. I'm PROUD of you

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Sarah

The starting seemed a bit weak but as the plot progressed, I loved this book and it was absolutely amazing.

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Good

Really nice. I really enjoyed it and I hope you will continue writing more fabulous books like this one

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A second chance at love

I really loved it. The way the author described each moment made me feel like I was watching it up close. The suspense made my heart race faster than it never had. I was so in love with it that it took me two days to finish it.

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angle wings

This is a good book. there's nothing weird or "What the heck" moments in the book and I think it is worth your time. The book is written from both of the main character's point of view which is nice considering how twisted (in a good way) the book is. I think that there should be a little more explanation.
This book is honestly one of the best I’ve ever read! Definitely one of my new favorites!

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saving my guardian angle

This book was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. The plot line was amazing .I love this story. You have a great gift for writing that not a lot of people have. Good luck with the rest of it and I can't wait to read more.

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Past redefined

I am not really a romantic story fan but this one was really good. I like the way the author has put things together nicely. I cant wait to read more.

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Devil digger

I really love the idea for this book. It was really cool and interesting. Also I am not over exaggerating on the rating. The book was really good and for once I found a book that didn’t have typos and things like that.

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Lux Locus

It’s a very spiced up flavor and very sweet at the same time. I was a fun time reading it all the way. Although there are a little grammar mistakes but the way the author have written the book, overcomes it.

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Claimed

I really love the idea for this book. It was really cool and interesting. Also I am not over exaggerating on the rating. The book was really good and for once I found a book that didn’t have typos and things like that.

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queen of darkness

It was amazing! I especially loved the writing style and the plot grabs you - the suspense was just right! There were a few spelling mistakes but they were otherwise minor. Other than that, I'm so happy to have read this.

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Mastering the fire

The story has a good story line, i really enjoyed reading it. Of course not everything is perfect, there are little grammar mistakes. Sentence structure is at some places not really understandable.
Overall the story is very good and has a good story line.
I really liked it.

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Haunting past

I love this story. You have a great gift for writing that not a lot of people have. Good luck with the rest of it and I can't wait to read more like these.

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Misfits

There are twists in the story that makes it really interesting. Little more effort is required, otherwise i really enjoyed reading it.

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Forbidden

The story is very juicy with a lot of pulp. Its so nice reading it. There are tinny winey mistakes but its utterly amazing. Keep it up.

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The bad boy saved me

It’s a very spiced up flavor and very sweet at the same time. I was a fun time reading it all the way. Although there are a little grammar mistakes but the way the author have written the book, overcomes it.

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Good

The story has a good story line, i really enjoyed reading it. Of course not everything is perfect, there are little grammar mistakes. Sentence structure is at some places not really understandable.
Overall the story is very good and has a good story line.
I really liked it.

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Good one

Really liked the story. The plot was great. I finished it in under a day because I couldn't stop reading. I wish the story was longer and went into more detail towards the end. Overall it was really good!

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The world of emotions

I really enjoyed reading this book! I just couldn’t stop reading it! Good job!

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Towards the dawn

At first, i was like "what" and then I am like "wow" - this just shows that the suspensions and mystery is really cool and i really enjoyed it. However, some of your paragraphs were too long for my liking but that's just a minor mistake - maybe you can break them up into two or something else? But overall, really liked the plot of it!

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Edge of eighteen

Woah. this book is awesome. Your description in every paragraph really hooks me in. You have a great writing style

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ROSE

I loved the story!It was nice to read something fresh in a while!It was very well written and I couldnt stop reading<3

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Cute

the designs on the top are so cute. They made my day.I love it as a whole.

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Love it

I love this story. You have a great gift for writing that not a lot of people have. Good luck with the rest of it and I can't wait to read more.

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Good

First, the writing sets the mood perfectly, and the characters are already very appealing. The cynical tone suits a novel of this kind very well. The grammar and editing is actually pretty good. Usually, the biggest problem for people on this site is the grammar and editing, but you actually paid close attention to this overlooked part of the writing process.
The plot hasn't really kicked in yet, but I really do think you're setting it up rather well. Honestly, one of the only criticisms I have is you should work on painting the setting more. A majority of your writing is on the characters but not enough of the setting or the description of your characters. Let your readers know how the character views the world.

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WOW

It’s hard to find a story that doesn’t hit every clichè— especially ones like this. But this story is quite an unique one, which makes me love it all the more.I love the story so amazing. I hope it gets published

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good

Woah. this book is awesome. Your description in every paragraph really hooks me in. You have a great writing style and I can't wait till the next update.

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Absolutely amazing

The story is perfect mix of suspense and mystery. It takes the reader to a different world. A world that the reader wouldn't want to leave. If you start the story, you wouldn't be able to stop reading. This is one of the best stories I've ever read!

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Good attempt

I love reading poetry and this one is a very nice story. I really liked it and enjoyed reading it.

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Nice

I am not really a romantic story fan but this one was really good. I like the way the author has put things together nicely. I cant wait to read more.

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Good

There are twists in the story that makes it really interesting. Little more effort is required, otherwise i really enjoyed reading it.

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Good

The story is very juicy with a lot of pulp. Its so nice reading it. There are tinny winey mistakes but its utterly amazing. Keep it up.

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Good job

It’s a very spiced up flavor and very sweet at the same time. I was a fun time reading it all the way. Although there are a little grammar mistakes but the way the author have written the book, overcomes it.

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Nice one

The story is Bonzer, I really liked it. So soft and cute. I love the colors added to the story. Just a little bit of work is required. Other than that, its amazing.

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Wow

It is so beautiful!!!

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BILLLLLL

Cute

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Unique

The story is utterly remarkable. I was really beautiful. I dont have the words to say anything further.

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Good job

The plot is full of fantasy. I really liked it. I don't think i need to say anything further cause i was really nice.
Keep it up.

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cute

The author has a very fairytale thoughts. The characters in the story are cute. The anime touch is very nice. I loved reading it.

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Good

The story has a good story line, i really enjoyed reading it. Of course not everything is perfect, there are little grammar mistakes. Sentence structure is at some places not really understandable.
Overall the story is very good and has a good story line.
I really liked it.

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Reverting scales

The story has a good story line, i really enjoyed reading it. Of course not everything is perfect, there are little grammar mistakes. Sentence structure is at some places not really understandable.
Overall the story is very good and has a good story line.
I really liked it.

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