Mehad Mohamed

Alexandria, Egypt

A 21-year-old aspiring Egyptian author. Please read my stories, leave reviews and follow me and I will do the same... Thanks in advance ❤️

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I don't know what to say, really. I have been abused and bullied before so it's somewhat triggering for me. I just don't understand something. Why does he write love , alex at the end of each letter when he hates her so much? (Edit: i think i get it now lol)

It's a good book , and i like it.

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Good job

The story has a lot of potential, but you need to work on your grammar and style of writing more.
I'm sorry for saying that, but for me an honest review is best for the author to improve. So keep up the good work and I'm waiting for your review on "Rose"

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Good job!

Sooo I couldn't leave the book before I read all the available chapters. I'm so excited for the upcoming chapters, and can't wait to read them.
As for criticism, I told you what you should work on in the comments.
But Overall, the story is fantastic, and you are doing an amazing job.💕

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Luna's dark past

Your writing style is nice and the story is really catchy. I'm really liking it so far. Good job.

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Good

There are some grammatical mistakes as well as spelling mistakes. The storyline is good the plot seems well developed and the characters are well presented, but I feel like you need to practice writing more.
I am sorry I don't mean to dishearten you, but you need to work on your writing style. Please don't take that the wrong way.
I wish you all the best ❤

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Good

I noticed some punctuation mistakes as well as spelling mistakes, but overall you are doing well.

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Wow

I saw some minor spelling mistakes and word choice problems, but other than that, the story is flawless.
I can now say that I am one of your biggest fans. Your writing style is amazing, and the storyline is beyond incredible. Keep doing what you are doing because it is obviously the right thing to do.

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Wow

Wow! Just wow! These are amazing the description is awesome your imagination is on fire ❤ keep it up! ❤❤

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Karina

Amazing storyline. I loved the book so much, but for me third pov is not the best. This is the only draw back for me in this story. Overall, you did an amazing job in writing this book. ♥️

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Loving Dr. Trouble

You are doing an amazing job. I love the storyline so far and I can't wait till you upload the rest of this story♥️♥️
You are so talented. Keep up the good work♥️

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Good

Sooo.. I only read the first chapter till now and I like where the story is going, but I have to say that it has a lot of grammar mistakes. You really need to work on your grammar and writing style more. But again to be honest I like the storyline and I will continue reading it and updating my review.
Keep up the good work 💜

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Amazing book

An AMAZING book. Highly recommend reading it 💜

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Good job!

You are doing great. The writing style is good. You give the necessary details at the right time. I'm really quite impressed and it's not easy to impress me. You have some minor grammatical mistakes, but overall the plat and development of the story is fantastic.
Keep up the good work.💕

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Unraveling Dr. Grey

It's a very good story according to what i read till now . Very interesting and very up my alley.. i will be waiting for the next chapters to be uploaded.

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Five words

Up till now, it's a very good story and your writing style is amazing. I will not put this story down till I finish it honestly. I really really liked it and can't wait to finish it.

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