Merail

So Beautiful!

This is so beautiful, yet so dark! I was reading it, and my tears were freely flowing because this is not a story this is a reality too many are facing alone. My heart yearned to reassure the main character, but I could tell that she wanted to end things, and so I predicted the ending before I read the last chapter. The fact that this ended with a suicide made it far more realistic. Good job!

I Loved It!

I really loved this book. The plot was good and the interactions between Jake and Nava were well-written and very detailed. Your writing style made me finish the book and then start again. Keep up the good work!

Tragic

Sad stories are my cup of tea. This story was beautifully tragic, and the writer did a great job in describing the internal conflict within Tullah; how she must keep the facade of a normal girl outside her house. The writer was able to show how the tragic events had led the protagonist to self harm. keep up the good work!

A Work of Art

This story is not finished yet, but I can already tell it's a work of art. The kind that would make you read it again and again. The plot was amazing, and the way the writer wrote the interactions between the siblings made me fall in love with these adorable characters. I was so immersed in it that with each chapter ending I wanted more. The fact that the writer made sure that the couple are not your normal dom/sub couple, where the sub immediately give in, is a brilliant idea. The fierce personality of the sub is a breath of fresh air from all the cliche stories we usually read.

Short But Splendid

This is by far the shortest story I have ever read, but damn if it is not the best! The writer is so good in describing the scenes. It had a rainy setting, and at one point, the writer with his descriptive words was able to to make hear the thunder of the stormy night they were having.

Too Good!

OMG! I love this story! The plot is amazing and very detailed, and I like a slow beginning. The characters are well-written and greatly developed in the next chapters. I loved the interactions between Ayla and the triplets, they are well described and written. Keep up the good work!

Phenomenal!

This short story is too good! Even though this genre is not my cup of tea, I really enjoyed it. You have pure talent, and this story should take number one in the competition. I'm rooting for you!

Loved It!

This story is so good! I really enjoyed these chapters and looking forward to the next ones in the future. The plot is very detailed and your descriptive writing style makes the story interesting to read. I want to know what will happen with Eric in the future!

A Good One!

This a good story! The plot was well-thought, and your writing style made me interact and feel what the characters felt. I was saddened by what happened to Jason, and I was very angry with his family! You did great with writing the interactions between the characters. I look forward to the future chapters and the type of ending Jason will have. Good job!

Worth It!

I'm not into this genre, but your book was definitely worth every second I had spent reading it. The plot was good, and your writing style concerning the sex scenes were very well-written and descriptive. The inner thoughts of the characters made the reading much more enjoyable. Good job!

Obsessed!

I'm obsessed with this book! Your amazing writing made me read it twice! The plot was amazing and the way you intermingled the original story with this one was pure talent! I fell in love with this tortured soul named Mistril, but I'm glad she had found her happy ever after. This book is for the ones that fell in love with the movies and wanted more!

So Cool!

This is so cool! A story with the protagonist and his side kick going on an adventure to meet different kind of creatures is my cup of tea. lance is a great character and easy to love. You have done so well with the way you have written him and his interactions with the other characters. This a story for all! If you're a fan of vampires, you'll find them here; if you're a fan of witches, you'll find them here etc.... This should be a bestseller!

Masterpiece!

These short stories are a work of are. They are beautifully written, and your brilliant use of description is no easy feet to do! I'm not a romantic person, but you just made me fall in love with the idea of love in general. The characters were well written and smoothly developed through out the stories. Your writing has a sense of nostalgia that made tear-eyed sometimes. I look forward to your works in the future!

Beautiful!

Thank you for this short work of art. Totally loved it! The plot was amazing, and the characters were well written.

Exciting!

This story is still ongoing, but so far it's great. The plot is amazing, and the writer has succeeded in showing the internal conflict within Makenzie. The conflict between keeping up her human emotions, or succumbing to the blood-thirst whilst dealing with side problems is beautifully written. Keep up the good work!

Great Potential

It's a good start! From the small glimpse I had of it, this story can turn out fantastic. In just two chapters, you were able to play on the emotional side of the readers. Pay attention to the grammar rules and the wording structure, and it will be one hell of a story!

Potential

This story has the potential to be one of the best in its genre. The plot is amazing, and the characters are well-rounded. The idea of a new world with Gods and Goddesses and their avatar representation is just a work of genius. Despite the many grammatical errors and simple wordings, the events are well synchronized and described. Given the chance, this story could be a bestseller.

Keeping Strength

This is the kind of story that makes me want to read it again just to gain the strength and hope the protagonists seems to have in spade. I love the fact that the story didn't just jump to the romance part. The writer took their time to establish a solid friendship between them before hooking them up. We are able to see the chemistry between Aisha and Aaron coming alive little by little, and that what makes it more relatable to us. Just two people meeting, becoming friends and then more is something that could happen to us in our daily lives. Not to mention, that the writer was able to twist humor and romance without focusing just on the tragic past of one the characters is a great accomplishment.

Phenomenal

I have never read much on romance stories, but this one made me rethink my decision. The way the writer was able to twist romance and humor was phenomenal. With every chapter, I found myself laughing at the sense of humor that decorated the dialogue; the way the characters jabbed at each other kept me entertained. However, at the same time, with the way the writer used words and inner voices, I found myself captivated and immersed in this overwhelming emotional baggage. I was angry on behalves of Zavyar and Serena. Sometimes, I had just wanted to strangle their dads with the way they acted. Overall, I enjoyed this book, and if this is your weakest point then that just shows of how great a writer you are!

Horror at its Finest

This story may not be finished yet, but the potential it has is great. The amount of horror I have felt in just a merely four chapters is indescribable and that is just the beginning. The evil doings of some of the characters

in the book, made me so angry and scared at the same time. Your way of describing the horrifying events made me connect with the kids in the story. When they were scared, so was I; when they wanted to leave that school, I felt trapped with them as well. Great job overall!