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The First She- no story quite like it!

This story is literally a masterpiece... in truth every story you have is carefully written, the characters built carefully and precisely, the plots different and imaginative. But the first she... takes you to another world, the way you have written this has caused me and I’m sure many other readers to fall in love with Vrox and the new earth you’ve created. It’s inspiring and truly magical... I have no other words then to say that from start to finish this story is gripping, enticing and incredible.

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