Michael James Beasley

Auburn, WA

Working on a multi-year novel project hoping to publish and have it be made into a movie and/or video game series. I also work as a part-time Database Technician for a local non-profit in WA State.

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Leaves me wanting more

This story is quite vivid and leaves me wanting more. I enjoyed the flow of writing that makes it feel almost as if I'm watching it as a movie in my mind. Wildly good!

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The Adventures of Emily Tual, Book One

The storyline is good and the plot is strong. However, I did notice a few technical errors in some parts of the book. There were some problems with verb tenses and some sentences that were not completely clear. There were some areas of incorrect word usage and some missing punctuation,

For example; In one chapter: the word 'then' was used instead of 'than' when comparing tasks for Bastet and another character.

If those were corrected and clarified, my rating would be higher.

Aside from that, the storyline is rather compelling and dramatic. I would consider reading the sequel when it is posted.

Nice work to the author!

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Such a captivating book

This book is pretty good. I discovered this author through a Facebook Author group and I am very intrigued by the plot and the story. It felt I was watching a movie. Nice work!

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Lightwarriors

This is not my genre of choice, but I appreciate the vivid imagination of the writer. It felt like a movie and I think if given the right opportunity, it could become one.

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Compelling read

I started this book this past weekend; things happened, and I had to put it down for a short time.

However, when I continued reading this book, it pulled me in like gravity. This book has an appealing British flair to it. I could also see it making its way to an adaptation on Amazon Prime and Britbox.

It took me a while to wrap my brain around the British-English grammar; ultimately,

I found more compelling to the storyline.

I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys romance/drama stories.

Great work!

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Thought-provoking!

Poetry is not my genre of choice, but I thoroughly enjoyed the thought-provoking and well-written passages written in this poem. I'm curious to read more. Nice job!

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The Elite Seven

This story has a lot of potential for a great novel series. But it definitely needs some work to fix some errors. However, I don't want that to discourage the author, whom has some talent and potential for a good book.

I would personally like to suggest looking for and signing up for a grammar aid, such as Grammarly, ProWritingAid, etc.

All in all, it is a good start. Please don't give up on your writing.

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Nice Work.

This is not my genre of choice but I was intrigued by the title. The story is very well thought out. I think some fixes to grammar and punctuation are needed. But overall, I enjoyed this story.

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Such A Fascinating Book

I just discovered this author in a Facebook group and I'm really impressed with the concept of this book. I'm also writing in a similar genre so it helps me in a way to learn more about this kind of work. I think it would make a great movie someday and I would like to see this book published. Great work! 👍🏻

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