Loved it and hated it as well
You write very well. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but not a lot, and the plot sucked me in life an industrial vacuum cleaner. For goodness sake, this isn't even my least favoured genre. You are clearly evil to be able to manipulate my thoughts the way you did.
Read the story now
Loved your characters and the plot line was horribly logical.
the old definition of tragedy as being something that boded ugly yet was going to play out regardless, kept coming back to me while i read your material.
Great work. Beautifully done. Minimal grammar and spelling errors, and I can't even pick on the few that were there because i know how many i commit myself when trying to hit a work count target.
Well done. Love your work.