Humiliation of a Samurai
This is so far from my wheelhouse, I don't think I've read anything like this since University, several centuries back. Despite that, I have been totally enthralled by it. Lyrical, and Virginia Wolffy, it is a gripping and poetic narrative. Voice is consistent. Imagery is strong almost visual in its rendering. This has great potential and I am looking forward to following it through to the conclusi0n..
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I haven't any complaints with language. I recognize that it is stylistic but totally appropriate to the context. I am n0 expert although I do have a background in both copywriting and education as well as a MA in Literature. None of this matters, but if a narrative grips me the way Humiliation of a Samurai has, it has to have legs. Take it all the way.