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great descriptive detail
An interesting piece of creative writing. The author has successfully 'set the scene' in chapter one through his vivid description of the Warden Star System. Some could argue that there is too much detail within the opening parts of chapter one. That being said, I find that it is through this descriptive detail, that we, the audience are able to more effectively visualise the unique settings within the story. The grammar in question here is a little rough, although it is not enough to force one to put the novel down. Overall, it is a fantastic novel with a good plot.Read the story now
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