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extremely good

I truly liked the story as, its well explained and detailed without overdoing it there fore leaving room for the imagination. Only spot a single grammar mistake which is a first for me as most stories I have reviewed had quite a few more. Overall I believe this story has a great future ahead and I for sure would enjoy to keep on reading it.

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its nice but needs polishing

I would continue reading it, if it wasn't for the grammatical and punctuation errors. Following a story is important however it becomes extremely hard when you have to decode what has been wrote in a somewhat poor manner, which can be easily corrected by proof reading before uploading. Apart from what I have pointed out, the rest is pretty well structured, perhaps a little bit more of character build up could be nice but it isn't a hundred percent necessary. I hope to see this story improve in its following releases.

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