Revan14

Hi, I'm an author who likes to read and write. I also like vampires, Star Wars, and Sims. Post on my wall if you have any questions about my books or just writing in general! Wattpad: @Revan1466

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Outstanding

This book is highly underrated. While the ending was sad, it was also uplifting and satisfying.

10 brilliantly contrasts between Simone's depressed and sometimes angry perspective to Joy's optimistic, motivating outlook. Throughout the entire course of the book you hear Simone's struggles with depression and anxiety (towards the end), which makes her character very relatable to the audience. Joy, (whose name was very symbolic to her character) served as her comforter, encouraging her during a very dark period of Simone's life.

At the very end, all conflicts were resolved. Simone's pain had ended, and she starts a new, happier chapter of her life, and thanks Joy, since only her comforting, encouraging letters were able to help her through the struggles. The very last chapter shows only one letter, from Joy, and reveals the reason for the title: 10, and the reader knows that Joy, too, in the end, found peace.

Overall, this book was outstanding, exceeding all expectations, brilliantly written and highly underrated. I would recommend it to anyone.

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Great start!

This story seems interesting so far, I'm intrigued to see what happens next! Since there's only 2 chapters, it is hard to give a full review, but great start, it has a lot of potential!

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Very intriguing and hooking

I have been hooked on this book ever since reading the first chapter. The story idea is very unique and interesting, and, in my opinion, was executed wonderfully. There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too noticeable. I am honestly loving this book so far, can't wait to read more! 💗

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Very dark and thrilling

This short story is very well-written, which is impressive considering the author's other books are so different. The character's schizophrenia added to the thrilling aspect of it all, since the reader didn't know what was real and what wasn't. Overall, definitely an enjoyable read.

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Good story idea

Overall, the story idea is very interesting, though I feel like a lot of it happened really fast, you could slow down the pacing a little. My only other suggestion is maybe combining and/or extending some of the chapters, since the majority of them are pretty short(maybe give some backround on Emma and Grace's friendship?). There are also a few spelling/grammar errors, but nothing too distracting.

Other than that, I feel like the story idea is good, but with some minor editing it could be even better.

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Great Story

The author instantly hooks you, making you wonder what had happened to the main character. I noticed no grammar mistakes while reading it, and the plot brings you in at the very beginning. I can easily see this becoming a movie or TV series. It would also do great as a full-length novel.

Overall, this story is amazingly written, making you want more. Definitely an enjoyable read.

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Very good so far!

I can already tell from the first chapter of this book that it's going to be very good! The plot is intriguing from the start, the main character is easily relatable, and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes. Overall, this book is unique in the best way, a great change from the usual romance books on this site.

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Really good so far!

This story is very good so far! I'm already hooked! You have a lot of talent, the story is captivating (as another review said) and makes me want to read more! I would recommend this book to anyone.

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Amazing!

I started reading this book a couple months ago, and was instantly hooked. It's definitely different than most alien-romance books, and in a good way! Please keep writing, you're such a good author! This book is so amazing, and to anyone who hasn't read it yet, you definitely should, you won't regret it! 💜💜

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