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Loving this book

Loving this book so far. Can't wait to find out what happens next :)

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Love this novel

Great book. Loving the characters and the plot. Hoping for a new chapter soon :)

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Great book

This book just keeps getting better and better. Now I'm off to the next chapter 🙏

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Best Read On this site

I honestly think this is one of the best books I ever read. The characters development and the plot it self were amazing, even though sometimes I wanted to hit them and tell them to smarten up,
I laughed, I cried and I yelled right along with the MC while reading this book. Honestly The writer could not of made me fall more in love with this novel if she tried.

Great Read, would recommend 10/10

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Bad Ending

I liked this book at the beginning,

It was a bit fast going in the relationship perspective( as in there was no real growth of characters or relationships to really make the reader feel like YES I WANT THEM TOGETHER but I was enjoying it,
One thing that did stick out to me though was, the relationship or lack there of between the MC and Cole was totally and completely based on her feeling sorry for him because of his mother.

Then After the fight the book went completely down hill. The characters and plot no longer made sense and if it did happen in real live there is no way, and I do mean no way she would be okay with Cole dating her friend. Or her friend so stupid to even look at guy once she knew not even five minutes before he was telling another girl- HER BEST FRIEND- that he loved her and when turned down all of sudden "RELIZED" he wasn't in love with her at all. Not to mention this is the same guy that when "IN LOVE" with the MC tried to kiss her best friend the day before he said he loves MC. Also there was no build up at all for her and Matt, they didn't date, there was no "cute" scene that made us want them together, The whole time I just felt sorry for him cause he was obviously friendzoned. There was no build uo what so ever,. If the author really wanted them together then maybe she should not of focused the story on COLE., I'm just saying a little foreshadowing would of been nice.

Look I know the author must of wanted everyone to end up with a happy ending but really she just ruined all the time she put into this novel by ruining her characters that she hadn't really built up in the first place. Like my opinion on the whole book right now is the MC is stupid. Her friend is a backstabbing Bitch, There wasn't really anything in the book about Matt to make a assessment on him other than "WEREN'T YOU FRIENDZONED THE WHOLE BOOK?" AND finally Cole will never stay in a lasting relationship because HE DOESN'T ACTUALLY LIKE ANYONE. Like if you wanted this mess to happen you could of made it alittle better by cutting the scene where Cole says HE LOVES THE MC. He should not of kissed her if he was suddenly IN THE CHAPTER BEFORE all over her best friend. Hell he could of been straight up and said "I THINK WERE BETTER AS FRIENDS".

I feel like I waisted every minute I put into this story.

2/5

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