MIsabellEH

Im a homeschooled high school student just trying to get through my courses. Writing is my passion and would much rather be thinking up new ways to add to my stories than memorizing history facts.

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Good start

I find myself liking the books whole idea, wanting to read more. What needs to happen though is serious editing. You are misusing words in multiple places. Other than that this story is great and I can't wait to read more.

You should use this site to fix your writing, you won't have to do anything:
https://www.grammarly.com/signin?utm_medium=internal&utm_source=signinHook

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Captured my attention....

One of my favorite things to read about is science and war, but fiction. This is right down my ally, sucking me in right at the first chapter. The plot is quite interesting, but I am wondering, even though the scientists made him young, don't you think he would still have the illness, or did I miss something? Haven't finished the full book yet but definitely putting it on my reading list.

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Can I just say....

I loved it? Is super good, and you should write more books like it.

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OMG I LOVED IT!

Okay, not going to lie, or lay it on too thick. I LOVED IT, it was one of the cutest stories I have ever read. I would buy this, I really should have paid! GREAT JOB!

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Lovely

It was captivating and from the start, it kept me at the edge of my seat. I say you go, girl!

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Very good

All I can say is great job and keep up the good work!

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Wonderful

BTW I still have to add part two to this so just wait.... that is if you like my story enough to want to XD

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Just Great

I love this story and cant wait for the next one

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