MJ Espinosa Author

A lover and reader of fantasy for over twenty years. A lover of words and languages, trying on a new hat and a new challenge. F B page @mjespinosaauthor F B group ‘Infinity Wolves’

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Pageturner, hot and so promising!

Alison is a firecracker, with a life full of possibilities before her, I can so relate to where she is at and what she’s looking for. I love the authentic writing stile, full of passion and emotion. Did I mention hot and intriguing? I will be fanning myself often. Cannot recommend this enough (this goes for any of this talented author’s books for that matter)!

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Way too long. Editing would go a long way.

This book needs some serious editing. It’s simply way too long. At some points the inner monologue is so repetitive that you’d think the author copy-pasted it from a previous chapter.
The characters could be so much more developed given the length of the book and some details are just left unexplored. Reading the comments, several people admit to just skipping pages because of all the needless banter. They are so bipolar that it’s hard to believe their feelings. Their love story is not one for the ages.

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