MJ Espinosa Author

A lover and reader of fantasy for over twenty years. A lover of words and languages, trying on a new hat and a new challenge. F B page @mjespinosaauthor F B group ‘Infinity Wolves’

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Beautiful love story

As a person who suffers from depression and anxiety, it was refreshing to have a character going through it without stigma and shame. I could relate to the “bad days” and the “good days” concept so well. Ander and Evan are sweet and beautiful in their own right and together. A captivating story full of openness and understanding.

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Way too long. Editing would go a long way.

This book needs some serious editing. It’s simply way too long. At some points the inner monologue is so repetitive that you’d think the author copy-pasted it from a previous chapter.
The characters could be so much more developed given the length of the book and some details are just left unexplored. Reading the comments, several people admit to just skipping pages because of all the needless banter. They are so bipolar that it’s hard to believe their feelings. Their love story is not one for the ages.

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