M.J. Avis

Cortez

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Best read of the year

This is by far the best book I have read this year. From the first page to the last you don't want to put it down. I love a book that is a page turner and I found it hard to walk away from this one. The books that keep you up at night because you can't stop reading are the best ever.

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Interesting

I kind of found it hard to really get pulled in at first. It has great potential if you can clean it up just a bit and watch the flow or reading. The ease of flow can be the difference between good and great. I love the idea and the summary is what really drew me into checking out the story. Keep it up and work on the flow and you could really make it truly a must read.

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Keep it coming

Very nice story so far. I do hope there is more to come as it feels unfinished. I love the story and plot it keeps you want to read it and that is always a plus. A real page turner and I love stories like that. Great job keep it up

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