Mary-Jane Kristo

Cloud 9 😆

Catholic. Gen Z. Avid authoress, girl with an imagination and a love of writing ✍🏼. full bio on Wattpad (link below).

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Invigorating style!

From the first chapter itself there is a hook and build up that won't let the reader go. The writing is clear, descriptive but not static. The plot will draw you in and I admire the way the author has phased things poetically or symbolically. The only difficulty I had was trying to figure out whose thoughts were the italicized texts, there should be a regular text after the first thought with a mention of she or he thought to him/herself before continuing with the thought. Otherwise, talented work.

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Bravo!

Someone call the cops, this book stole my attention! lol. The characters hooked me, the plot reeled me in and kept me up at night and the suspense is wreaking havoc! I HAVE to know what happens next, please update!
Apart from a few grammatical errors, the book was a thriller so far. Please feed the adrenaline rush with more chapters!

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