Beauty and the Beasts
Smooth Rides is a story about Beauty trying to survive a threat trying to kill her and her own love life. Beauty's character is a very typical strong and feisty leading woman. However the author uses this as a base to build Beauty's character. In key moments littered around this novel it is shown that she has a more vulnerable side of her. I do wish to point out that there is a bit of melodrama that occurs.
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Additionally, there's a sort of sudden emotional changes that happen to Beauty which can be confusing at times. It was like skipping the middle of a plot. I feel like there should have been more build up.
Writing wise, I enjoyed your style. There is a bit of run on sentences specifically in first chapter. The sentence in question was her describing her lip gloss.
Overall this story has potential and I look forward to see how it goes.