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I liked the story very much! But honestly i think it's a bit rushed at the end where Devin suddenly tries to k!ll Emma. You should add something in between like maybe he started asking some weird questions. Like =
Are you scared easily?
Do you like black?
Am i scary?
How often do you go to graveyards?
What would you do if someone killed or betrayed you??

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