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Interesting!

I really like the concept you have going here. Very interesting idea with the powers! I think I wanted a bit more description of surroundings at times. This might just be a personal preference so ignore it if you'd like, but there were times I wanted to know a bit more about what everything looked like around the characters or what they were sensing, smelling, seeing...that kind of thing. I think it will help add more depth and dynamic to your scenes and characters. But overall, awesome idea!

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